How to Craft Your Essay for the Tom and Selby Prince Scholarship

Brainstorming Across the Four Buckets

Divide your brainstorming into four material buckets to capture the essence of your story:

• Background: Reflect on experiences that have shaped your identity and aspirations. Consider family influences, cultural background, and significant life events.
• Achievements: Identify key accomplishments, both academic and extracurricular. Quantify your successes where possible, such as leadership roles, projects completed, or awards received.
• The Gap: Acknowledge any gaps in your education or experience that the scholarship will help you bridge. Explain how further study at Stetson University will enable you to achieve your goals.
• Personality: Share personal anecdotes that reveal your values, interests, and unique qualities. This adds depth to your application and helps the committee connect with you on a human level.

Creating an Outline

Structure your essay with a clear outline. A strong essay typically includes:

1. Introduction: Start with a compelling in-scene moment or anecdote that draws the reader in.
2. Body Paragraphs: Each paragraph should focus on one bucket. Use specific examples and evidence to support your points.
3. Conclusion: Reflect on your journey and articulate your commitment to making an impact. Reiterate how the scholarship will help you achieve your educational and career goals.

Drafting Voice and Style

Write in an active voice, focusing on your actions and experiences. Avoid clichés and vague statements. Instead, use precise language that conveys your message clearly. Each paragraph should present one idea, with smooth transitions that guide the reader through your narrative.

Revision and “So What?”

After drafting, revise your essay with a critical eye. Ensure that each section answers the question, “So what?” Reflect on how your experiences have shaped you and why they matter. Seek feedback from trusted peers or mentors who can provide constructive criticism.

Common Pitfalls to Avoid

Be mindful of these common pitfalls:

• Avoid starting with generic statements or clichés that do not add value to your essay.
• Do not exaggerate or fabricate experiences; authenticity is key.
• Steer clear of passive voice and bureaucratic language that can dilute your message.
• Ensure your essay is cohesive and logically structured, avoiding disjointed thoughts.