How to Write Your Essay for the Rick Levin Memorial Scholarship

Brainstorming Across the Four Buckets

To create a compelling narrative, organize your thoughts into four material buckets:

• Background: Consider your upbringing, experiences, and influences that have shaped your educational and career goals. Identify key moments that illustrate your journey.
• Achievements: Highlight specific accomplishments, such as academic successes, leadership roles, or community service. Use metrics and outcomes where possible to demonstrate your impact.
• The Gap: Reflect on what you currently lack that further education can provide. Be honest about your aspirations and how this scholarship will help bridge that gap.
• Personality: Infuse your essay with personal details that reveal your values, motivations, and unique qualities. This humanizes your application and makes you memorable.

Outline Your Essay

Creating a structured outline will guide your writing process. Consider the following sections:

1. Introduction: Start with a concrete moment or in-scene narrative that captures attention. Avoid generic statements.
2. Body Paragraphs: Each paragraph should focus on one bucket. Use the STAR method to narrate achievements and challenges, ensuring you reflect on the significance of each experience.
3. Conclusion: Reinforce your commitment to your goals and how the scholarship will facilitate your journey. Reflect on what you have learned and how you plan to give back.

Drafting Voice and Style

When drafting, maintain an active voice and specific language. Avoid clichés and vague expressions. Each paragraph should convey a clear idea and transition smoothly to the next. Remember to reflect on the “So what?” in your experiences—why do they matter to your future and the community?

Revision and “So What?”

After drafting, take a break before revising. Look for clarity, coherence, and engagement. Ensure that your essay answers the prompt fully and reflects your personal journey. Ask yourself, “What insights have I gained, and how will I apply them?” This reflection will strengthen your narrative.

Common Pitfalls to Avoid

As you finalize your essay, be mindful of these common mistakes:

• Avoid starting with clichés or generic statements.
• Do not exaggerate achievements; be honest and specific.
• Steer clear of passive voice; use active construction to convey agency.
• Ensure all details are true and verifiable; do not invent facts or experiences.