How to Write an Essay for the Northern Haserot Scholarship

Brainstorming Across the Four Buckets

To create a compelling narrative, gather material in the following areas:

• Background: Reflect on key experiences that have shaped your educational and personal journey. Consider family influences, community involvement, or challenges you've overcome.
• Achievements: List significant accomplishments, both academic and extracurricular. Quantify your impact where possible, such as leadership roles, projects completed, or awards received.
• The Gap: Identify areas where further study or support is needed. Explain how this scholarship will bridge that gap and facilitate your educational goals.
• Personality: Share personal anecdotes that highlight your values, interests, and motivations. This adds a humanizing element to your essay.

Creating an Outline

Once you have gathered your material, outline your essay. A suggested structure includes:

1. Introduction: Start with a specific moment or experience that captures your journey. Avoid general statements.
2. Body Paragraphs: Dedicate sections to each of the four buckets. Ensure each paragraph focuses on one main idea and transitions smoothly to the next.
3. Conclusion: Reflect on your journey and articulate your future aspirations. Emphasize how the scholarship will help you achieve these goals.

Drafting Voice and Style

As you draft your essay, maintain an active voice. Use specific details and avoid vague statements. Remember to reflect on your experiences and articulate the significance of your journey. Each section should answer the “So what?” question—why does this matter to you and your future?

Revision and “So What?”

After drafting, take a break before revising. Look for clarity, coherence, and impact. Ensure each paragraph contributes to your overall narrative. Ask yourself if each section answers the “So what?” question. Consider sharing your draft with a mentor or peer for feedback.

Common Pitfalls to Avoid

Be mindful of the following mistakes:

• Avoid clichés and general statements that do not add value.
• Do not include invented facts or experiences; authenticity is crucial.
• Steer clear of overly complex language or jargon that may obscure your message.
• Ensure your essay has a clear focus and does not meander off-topic.