How to Write Your Essay for the MWCC Alumni Association Scholarship

Brainstorming Across the Four Buckets

To create a compelling narrative, organize your thoughts into four material buckets:

• Background: Consider your personal history, including significant life experiences that have shaped your educational journey. Reflect on your motivations for attending MWCC and how your background informs your academic goals.
• Achievements: Identify key accomplishments that demonstrate your commitment to your education. This could include academic performance, leadership roles, community service, or relevant projects. Use specific metrics or outcomes to quantify your achievements.
• The Gap: Acknowledge any challenges you face in continuing your education. Discuss why further study is essential for you and how the scholarship will bridge the gap between your current situation and your future aspirations.
• Personality: Infuse your essay with personal details that reveal your values and character. Share anecdotes that illustrate your resilience, determination, and unique perspective.

Outline Your Essay

Structure your essay logically to ensure clarity and flow. A suggested outline might include:

1. Introduction: Start with a vivid moment or scene that encapsulates your journey or aspirations.
2. Body Paragraphs: Dedicate separate paragraphs to each of the four material buckets. Ensure each paragraph has a clear main idea and transitions smoothly to the next.
3. Conclusion: Reflect on how the scholarship will impact your future and reinforce your commitment to your educational and career goals.

Drafting Voice and Style

As you draft, maintain an active voice and be specific in your language. Avoid clichés and vague statements about your passion. Instead, focus on concrete examples and reflections. Each section should answer the question, “So what?”—why your experiences and aspirations matter in the context of this scholarship.

Revision & “So What?”

After drafting, take time to revise your essay. Look for clarity, coherence, and engagement. Ask yourself if each paragraph effectively contributes to your overall narrative. Ensure that your reflections highlight personal growth and future ambitions. Seek feedback from peers or mentors to gain different perspectives.

Pitfalls to Avoid

Be mindful of common mistakes:

• Avoid starting with generic statements or clichés. Open with a specific moment or story.
• Do not include invented facts or embellishments. Stay truthful to your experiences.
• Ensure each paragraph has a clear focus and supports your overall message.
• Steer clear of passive voice; use active verbs to convey your actions and impact.