Crafting Your Essay for the Marie S. Donaldson Scholarship

Brainstorming Across the Four Buckets

To create a compelling narrative, gather material across four key areas:

• Background: Reflect on your personal history, family influences, and experiences that have shaped your educational journey. Consider how these elements connect to your desire to attend Stetson University.
• Achievements: List your academic and extracurricular accomplishments. Quantify your achievements where possible (e.g., GPA, leadership roles, awards) to provide concrete evidence of your capabilities.
• The Gap: Identify any gaps in your experience or education that this scholarship could help fill. Discuss why further study at Stetson is essential for your personal and professional development.
• Personality: Think about what makes you unique. Share anecdotes that reveal your values, interests, and motivations. This will humanize your essay and help the committee connect with you.

Structuring Your Outline

With your material gathered, outline your essay to create a logical flow. A suggested structure includes:

1. Introduction: Start with a specific moment or experience that captures your journey. Avoid generic statements and aim to engage the reader immediately.
2. Body Paragraphs: Dedicate each paragraph to one of the four buckets. Use the STAR method to highlight specific achievements or challenges, detailing the situation, task, action, and result.
3. Conclusion: Reflect on what you have learned through your experiences and how receiving this scholarship will impact your future. Answer the “So what?” question to emphasize the significance of your journey and aspirations.

Drafting Voice and Style

As you draft your essay, maintain an active voice and clear, concise language. Use specific examples and avoid clichés. Your writing should reflect your authentic voice, allowing the committee to get to know you. Aim for a balance between professionalism and personal storytelling.

Revision & “So What?”

After drafting, take a break before revising. Look for areas where you can enhance clarity and impact. Ensure that each paragraph contributes to the overall narrative and answers the “So what?” question. Seek feedback from trusted peers or mentors who can provide constructive criticism.

Common Pitfalls to Avoid

Be mindful of these common mistakes:

• Avoid vague statements and superlatives that lack evidence.
• Steer clear of passive voice; focus on your actions and contributions.
• Do not include fabricated details or awards; authenticity is crucial.
• Refrain from using clichés or generic openings that fail to engage the reader.