How to Write a Compelling Essay for the Lawrence and Rita Olson Scholarship

Brainstorming Across the Four Buckets

Organize your thoughts into four key areas:

• Background: Reflect on your heritage and experiences that have shaped your identity as a member of the Muscogee (Creek) Nation. What challenges have you faced, and how have they influenced your perspective?
• Achievements: List your academic accomplishments, extracurricular activities, and any leadership roles. Be specific about metrics or outcomes, such as grades, awards, or contributions to community projects.
• The Gap: Identify what you currently lack in your educational journey. This could include specific skills, knowledge, or experiences that further study will help you acquire.
• Personality: Share humanizing details about yourself. What values drive you? What unique experiences have shaped your goals? Use anecdotes to illustrate your character.

Outline Your Essay

Create a structured outline based on your brainstorming. Start with a compelling introduction that draws the reader in with a specific moment or story. Follow with sections dedicated to each of the four buckets, ensuring each paragraph has a clear focus and transition to the next idea. Conclude with a reflection on your aspirations and how the scholarship will facilitate your journey.

Drafting Voice and Style

When drafting, use an active voice to convey your actions and experiences. Avoid clichés and vague phrases. Instead of saying you are passionate about your studies, demonstrate this through specific examples of your commitment and achievements. Ensure each paragraph conveys a single idea, leading logically to the next.

Revision and the “So What?” Factor

After completing your draft, revisit each section and ask yourself, “So what?” This question helps ensure that your writing reflects not just what you have done, but also why it matters. Are you clearly articulating how your experiences and aspirations align with the scholarship’s goals? Seek feedback from mentors or peers to refine your essay further.

Common Pitfalls to Avoid

Be mindful of the following common mistakes:

• Avoid starting with generic statements or clichés.
• Do not exaggerate or invent facts about your experiences or achievements.
• Steer clear of passive voice; always highlight your role in your accomplishments.
• Ensure that your essay remains focused and coherent, avoiding tangents that distract from your main message.