How to Write Your Essay for the Intermountain Section AWWA Scholarship

Brainstorming Across the Four Buckets

To create a compelling narrative, gather material across four key areas:

• Background: Reflect on your personal journey. What experiences have shaped your interest in water science or engineering? Consider family influences, educational experiences, or community involvement.
• Achievements: List your relevant accomplishments. Focus on academic metrics, leadership roles, and specific projects related to water or engineering. Quantify your achievements where possible, such as GPA, awards, or successful initiatives.
• The Gap: Identify what you currently lack in your education or experience. Explain how this scholarship will help you bridge that gap. Be specific about the skills or knowledge you hope to gain.
• Personality: Infuse your essay with personal details that humanize your application. Share anecdotes that reflect your values and commitment to making an impact in the field of water works.

Creating an Outline

Organize your thoughts into a clear outline. Start with an engaging introduction that draws the reader in with a specific moment or experience. Follow with sections that address each of the four buckets. Ensure that each paragraph transitions smoothly, guiding the reader through your narrative.

Drafting Voice and Style

When drafting, use an active voice to convey your ideas clearly. Avoid abstract language and focus on concrete examples. Each paragraph should contain one main idea, supported by evidence from your experiences. Reflect on the significance of each experience, answering the question, “So what?” to demonstrate its relevance to your goals and the scholarship.

Revision and Reflection

After completing your draft, take time to revise. Look for clarity, coherence, and engagement. Ensure that your essay answers the prompt fully and reflects your unique perspective. Seek feedback from mentors or peers, and be open to constructive criticism. Revise with an eye for detail, checking for grammar and spelling errors.

Common Pitfalls to Avoid

Be mindful of common mistakes that can weaken your essay:

• Avoid clichés and overused phrases that detract from your unique story.
• Do not exaggerate or fabricate experiences; authenticity is crucial.
• Steer clear of vague language. Be specific about your achievements and aspirations.
• Ensure your essay stays focused on your personal narrative rather than general statements about the field.