How to Write Your Essay for the Henry Gassett Scholarship

Brainstorming Across the Four Buckets

Organize your thoughts into four key areas:

• Background: Consider your personal history and experiences that have shaped your educational journey. Think about pivotal moments that influenced your decision to attend UMass Amherst.
• Achievements: List your academic and extracurricular accomplishments. Quantify your achievements with specific metrics, such as GPA, leadership roles, or community service hours.
• The Gap: Identify areas where you seek growth. What skills or knowledge do you hope to gain through your studies at UMass Amherst? Explain how the scholarship will help bridge this gap.
• Personality: Infuse your essay with personal anecdotes that showcase your values, interests, and character. This humanizes your application and helps the committee connect with you.

Outline Your Essay

Structure your essay logically:

1. Introduction: Start with a compelling moment or anecdote that draws the reader in. Avoid clichés and aim for specificity.
2. Body Paragraphs: Dedicate each paragraph to one of the four buckets. Use the STAR method to highlight achievements and experiences, focusing on the situation, task, action, and result.
3. Conclusion: Reflect on what you’ve learned and how you plan to apply this knowledge in the future. Reinforce how the scholarship will facilitate your goals.

Drafting Voice and Style

Maintain an active voice throughout your essay. Use clear, concise language and avoid bureaucratic jargon. Each paragraph should focus on a single idea, ensuring clarity and coherence. Transition smoothly between sections to guide the reader through your narrative.

Revision and the “So What?” Factor

After drafting your essay, revisit it with a critical eye. Ask yourself: What changed in me through these experiences? Why does this matter to my future and to the scholarship committee? Ensure that every section answers the “So what?” question, providing insight into your motivations and aspirations.

Common Pitfalls to Avoid

Be mindful of the following:

• Avoid starting with generic statements or clichés. Open with a specific moment that encapsulates your journey.
• Don’t rely on vague expressions of passion. Use concrete examples to demonstrate your commitment and achievements.
• Steer clear of passive voice; always attribute actions to specific subjects.
• Ensure all facts and figures are accurate and verifiable. Don’t invent experiences or achievements.