How to Write a Compelling Essay for the Harva Kuykendall Scholarship

Brainstorming Across the Four Buckets

Organize your thoughts using the four material buckets: background, achievements, gap, and personality.

• Background: Consider what experiences have shaped you. This could include family influences, educational experiences, or community involvement.
• Achievements: Identify key accomplishments that demonstrate your abilities. Use specific metrics or outcomes, such as leadership roles, projects completed, or awards received.
• The Gap: Reflect on what you currently lack and how further study at Tarleton State University will help you bridge that gap. Be specific about your academic and career goals.
• Personality: Think about what makes you unique. Share personal anecdotes that reveal your values, interests, and motivations.

Creating an Outline

Once you have gathered your material, create an outline to organize your thoughts. Start with an engaging opening that draws the reader in. Each section of your essay should flow logically to the next.

1. Introduction: Begin with a concrete moment or in-scene description that captures your journey.
2. Body Paragraphs: Use one paragraph for each bucket. Ensure each paragraph has a clear focus and transitions smoothly.
3. Conclusion: Reflect on your journey and articulate your commitment to making an impact through your education.

Drafting Voice and Style

As you draft your essay, maintain an active voice and be specific. Avoid vague statements. Instead of saying you are passionate about a subject, show how you have engaged with it through specific actions or experiences. Remember to answer the “So what?” question in each section—why does your story matter?

Revision & “So What?”

After drafting, take a break before revising. Read your essay with fresh eyes, focusing on clarity and coherence. Ask yourself if each section effectively communicates your message and if it demonstrates your fit for the scholarship. Seek feedback from trusted peers or mentors to gain different perspectives.

Common Pitfalls to Avoid

Be mindful of these common pitfalls:

• Avoid clichés and generic statements—be original and authentic.
• Do not use passive voice when an active subject exists.
• Steer clear of heavy bureaucratic phrasing; keep your language clear and engaging.
• Never invent details or embellish facts about your experiences.