How to Write Your Essay for the Decker and Cheryl Youngman Scholarship

Brainstorming Across the Four Buckets

To create a compelling essay, gather material across four key areas:

• Background: Reflect on your personal history, family influences, and formative experiences. What moments have shaped your educational journey?
• Achievements: List your significant accomplishments, both academically and in extracurricular activities. Quantify your achievements where possible (e.g., leadership roles, awards, projects).
• The Gap: Identify any gaps in your education or experiences that this scholarship would help you address. Why is further study at Stetson University essential for your goals?
• Personality: Think about what makes you unique. Consider your values, interests, and any personal anecdotes that demonstrate your character.

Outline Your Essay

Structure your essay logically. A strong outline typically includes:

1. Introduction: Start with an engaging moment or anecdote that draws the reader in. Avoid generic statements.
2. Body Paragraphs: Dedicate each paragraph to one of the four buckets. Use specific examples and reflections to illustrate your points.
3. Conclusion: Summarize your key points and reflect on how receiving this scholarship would impact your future. Highlight your commitment to making a difference.

Drafting Voice and Style

Write in an active voice, ensuring that your sentences are clear and direct. Use specific details and metrics to support your claims. Avoid clichés and vague statements; instead, focus on authentic experiences that convey your passion and determination. Remember to answer the “So what?” question in each section, reflecting on the significance of your experiences.

Revision and “So What?”

After drafting, take time to revise your essay. Look for areas where you can enhance clarity and impact. Ask yourself if each paragraph contributes to your overall narrative and if it answers the “So what?” question. Consider seeking feedback from mentors or peers who can provide constructive criticism.

Common Pitfalls to Avoid

Be mindful of these common mistakes:

• Avoid starting with clichés or overly broad statements.
• Do not exaggerate or invent experiences; authenticity is key.
• Steer clear of passive voice; keep your writing active and engaging.
• Ensure that every detail serves a purpose in your narrative.